(short fiction)
I want this to be a whole book.
"It seemed a laugh light enough to fly over the fence he’d been building around himself and settle on his shoulder."-- Sigh...this is exquisite.
You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.
It is lovely. Wish there was more!
I thought you said this was fiction...
That line about “one shoe always missing the other…” dang. This is really good writing John. Love it! As it were, eros arrows. Ha!
I cried and smiled a little. Thanks, John.
It's actually Tim. I just get inundated with subscription details...
So good, John! A nice little stop [Gap] for me this morning (see what I did there?)
Lovely, simply lovely.
This feels like part of a larger story. I hope you write it. I’d like to spend more time with these people.
More. Give us more.
More, please, sir...
I'd read the novel!
I want this to be a whole book.
"It seemed a laugh light enough to fly over the fence he’d been building around himself and settle on his shoulder."-- Sigh...this is exquisite.
You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.
It is lovely. Wish there was more!
I thought you said this was fiction...
That line about “one shoe always missing the other…” dang. This is really good writing John. Love it! As it were, eros arrows. Ha!
I cried and smiled a little. Thanks, John.
It's actually Tim. I just get inundated with subscription details...
So good, John! A nice little stop [Gap] for me this morning (see what I did there?)
Lovely, simply lovely.
This feels like part of a larger story. I hope you write it. I’d like to spend more time with these people.
More. Give us more.
More, please, sir...
I'd read the novel!